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21 October 2007 @ 09:33 pm
[Poetry!]  

Well- I was going through my computer files and found this! I was going to post it back when I first wrote it for my Creative Writing class, but I forgot :P So here it is now!

Presenting *insert trumpet noise here* Bump in the Night! (It's my first poem in a long loooooooooong time xD) 
 



 

Bump In The Night


 

The house reverberates with a deadly silence,

as the family goes out, leaving you on your own.


 

And who knows if you'll still be there when they return?


 

It's when they're gone that the house springs into sudden life.

Ordinary objects becoming horrible monsters;


 

There is a arm hanging limply at the door, it's fingers shining, even in the darkness as it hangs.

(Is it the arm of a monster's victim- or is it the monster itself- waiting to strike?)


 

Red eyes change, glaring downward

(the gaze making me uncomfortable, I burrow deeper into my cocoon of blankets)


 


 

Noises penetrate the once quiet house;


 

screeches reverberate punctuated occasionally by slurps and cries

(the unknown noises are scarier than the monsters you can see, 'cause you don't know where these monsters lurk.)


 

The lonely, yet crowed darkness is oppressive.

(It penetrates even this warm sanctuary of pulled-up covers.)

 
 
Current Location: my room
Current Mood: cranky
Current Music: Zira's Lullabye- TLK2
 
 
( 6 comments — Post a new comment )
Κατε: hug[info]katelove12 on October 22nd, 2007 03:38 am (UTC)
Ummm...

THAT WAS GREAT!

I really like it. I love dark poetry. I love it (and the title). Great work!
Jeannie: Enchanted Pic! *GASP*[info]ayuette on October 22nd, 2007 11:27 am (UTC)
Thanks! :D I don't know if I'd call it "dark" poetry... but that's okay! I don't have much experance in that line of writing. But Its (sorta) fun to do. Now if I could just learn to like writing sonnets...


OH!

I'm glad you liked the title too, it took me FOREVER to come up with one. Titles are tough for me to pick.
Dana: haunted holiday jack[info]piyo_halliwell on October 22nd, 2007 04:00 am (UTC)
Ooo, nice. I like it.
Jeannie: Here Me Now?[info]ayuette on October 22nd, 2007 11:25 am (UTC)
Thanks. :) It needs some work. But I thought I'd post it anyway :P
♥ It's making me stronger.: Wilbur defeated[info]secretwindow1 on October 22nd, 2007 01:26 pm (UTC)
That's really good, I love it! :)

You write in this style nicely, I've never been able to write in this style before.
Jeannie: Kairi[info]ayuette on October 22nd, 2007 07:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much! I really like the freeverse style of poetry. Sonnetts on the other hand (or anything with rhyme!) are the bane of my existance :)


You're good with rhymes though! Next time I have a rhyming poem I'll ask you xD
 
 

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